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Luminous
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12+
Release Date
June 30, 2011
ISBN
978-0525422471
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As reality slips and time stands still, Consuela finds herself thrust into the world of the Flow. Removed from all she loves into this shifting world overlapping our own, Consuela quickly discovers she has the power to step out of her earthly skin and cloak herself in new ones-skins made from the world around her, crafted from water, fire, air. She is joined by other teens with extraordinary abilities, bound together to safeguard a world they can affect, but where they no longer belong.

When murder threatens to undo the Flow, the Watcher charges Consuela and elusive, attractive V to stop the killer. But the psychopath who threatens her new world may also hold the only key to Consuela's way home.

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Beautifully Bizarre
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A brave and elaborately imagined tale—laden with unforgettable imagery.

One thing I can say for certain about Luminous… I’ve never encountered anything quite like it. Metcalf fuses an eloquent knack for description with a unique blend of urban-fantasy, cultural mysticism, and horror. The basic premise alone is intriguing—the idea of there being a suspended state somewhere between life and death, and that the rare occupiers of this realm could be given guardian angel-like assignments—has more potential hooks than a literary tackle box. Add to that the enrichment of a plus-sized Hispanic heroine, and I was enthralled from the get-go.

There were a few taste-based downsides, however.

*The romance felt too close to inexplicable insta-love for this readers preference, and the lack of getting-to-know-you intimacy made it overall difficult to buy into.

*The characters, with the exception of the villain, all felt emotionally disengaged. As a result, when the body count stared to rise, I didn’t really feel the concern or turmoil I probably should have. I wanted to relate to and feel invested in them—especially Consuela. But I found I kept reading to learn would happen, rather than because I cared about the ensemble cast or their relationships.

*The worldbuilding and transitions were frequently confusing. I was never quite sure of the rules and/or limitations of the place where we spend nearly the entire book. And while that kept things from feeling predictable, it also raised aspects that felt a little too convenient to the plot.

I almost never comment on or care about cover art, but in this case, I have to make an exception. The cover, while lovely, doesn’t do this book any favors. I’d argue it’s actually a detriment. The feel is so pristine and light fantasy, you'd never suspect the macabre detour the story takes. And the blurb on the back doesn't even half-prepare you for the extent of the ethereal day-of-the-dead strangeness you are about to encounter.
Don't get me wrong, I LOVED the originality of this concept—the atmospheric miasma of the story itself. But the book simply doesn’t deliver on the impression the cover seemed to be promising.

I’d like to stress, this is definitely an author I plan to keep an eye on. It’s been several years now since this book’s release. I’d love to see what she might do given a little more time and a different kind of storyline.
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Unique Paranormal
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This story has a lot going for it. It's a unique twist on the whole paranormal premise with a Latina protagonist that enters a surreal world by shedding her skin. There are Mexican cultural references such as El Dia de los Muertos-Day of the Dead-in which she finds other skeletons dancing which is both beautiful and haunting. I totally loved how she says she feels beautiful as a skeleton. Consuela at first is confident even when she finds herself in the mysterious, surreal world of the Flow. I totally loved how Metcalf starts each chapter off with quotes from Octavio Paz, who won a Noble prize in Literature and is a famous Mexican author. Each paragraph is beautifully quoted and fits right in with this story. Also each of the other characters has his/her own unique characteristics. Tender, who takes on pain; V, who was suppose to help Consuela, Wish, who grants wishes, and Sissy, who's kind of a director of the Flow.

I love stories that have elements of Mexican surrealism, so I savored this tale. When Consuela tries to find out who is killing those within the Flow, she fears what will happen to her. I did think this part of the story was fast paced, but once again I was able to stay with Consuela, hoping she'd not only find out who was murdering the others but be able to get back to her own world. There were some passages I read outloud to my friend, just to hear the words. Metcalf does a great job showing us a strong, confident protagonist who finds herself in a world where reality and surrealism collide. I loved this story but do suggest that you don't rush through it as you'll miss some important elements of the tale.

This is an unique twist on the usual paranormal tale with a strong Latina protagonist. Creative and very intriguing, I recommend this tale to those who love different tales with a surreal flavor.
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Powerful. Breathtaking. Horrific. Fantastic. Beautiful.
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Luminous, surprisingly written in third person, opens with the main character, Consuela Louisa Aguilar Chavez battling the dreaded dressing room to find a decent pair of jeans. Right before her life turns utterly inside out. As she struggles to understand what is happening to her, the inner strength she has leads her, and subsequently the reader, through the beauty and the horrors of the Flow. Finding her way back home requires the stripping away of all former conceptions and revealing the core of who she is.

"Know thyself" is what V, her handsome and tortured new friend, keeps whispering to her. In a voice only she can hear. One he is not aware she is hearing. And while she treasures every moment, every accidental touch, she just wants to get home. And V is sure can save her. He must save her.

As more and more of their cohorts are murdered, Consuela must discover what she really believes and how to act without damning herself and the rest of the Flow. I would love to go on and on about the story and how incredible the plot is as well as all the subtle twists and turns, but I cannot bring myself to take those discoveries away from you. Each new revelation pulls you deeper and deeper inside, hurling down corridors one normally only navigates in a dream. All while moving closer and closer to the one danger that could end it all.

If you only buy one more book this year, make it Luminous by Dawn Metcalf. In fact, by several copies and give them out as Christmas presents. Give one to your local and/or high school library. Chase kids down in Barnes & Noble and shove this book into their hands.

Powerful. Breathtaking. Horrific. Fantastic. Beautiful.
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