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Reader reviewed by Ooblick

hey i think this book is very interesting and sure was a mystery............... just wat i was lookin for!!! i absolutely LOVE mystery books! in my opinion about mystery i think they r the BEST kind of books that were ever thought of!! well i dont have much time to write this review so there r just a few more thigs i want to say and they r...................! i think that this book needs a little improvements like........ i think that it needs to be a little more nonconfusing about everything and another thing is that when u get done writing about somethin really really good in a chapter i think u should not start somethin new in the next chapter and then the next chapter after that i think u should start up wit that mystery from 1 chapter before that is jus a couple suggestions i have for u after reading such a GREAT book!!!!!!!!!!!! luv ya lots and hope u write more and more books!!!!!!!!!! -Ooblick