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4.8 65
Middle Grade Fiction
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a slight dissapointment
Overall rating
3.0
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Reader reviewed by shiningsaba
A slight dissapointment... for one, it is rather short, and for another, the langauge is much more complex. The first chapter was a bore, and Dumbledore's death was not drawn out enough. In ch. 6, Draco Malfoy sounded rather mature and not like himself. However, there was plenty of Romance, although the end of Harry/Ginny was rather abrupt. The end of the story is left hanging, not at the end of the year, but rather at the middle, and I don't like the idea of Harry not returning to Hogwarts.
A slight dissapointment... for one, it is rather short, and for another, the langauge is much more complex. The first chapter was a bore, and Dumbledore's death was not drawn out enough. In ch. 6, Draco Malfoy sounded rather mature and not like himself. However, there was plenty of Romance, although the end of Harry/Ginny was rather abrupt. The end of the story is left hanging, not at the end of the year, but rather at the middle, and I don't like the idea of Harry not returning to Hogwarts.
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