Sorry, but I feel Ms. Aidinoff's story of Eden is horrible. To depict God as a big ol' meanie who is controlling, unthoughtful, unloving and is given to temper tantrums - that's just WRONG!!
And having the Serpent somehow becoming a tender lover for Eve - outrageous...
She also seems to show Adam as rather a sweet but dopey guy. I don't like it.
It's great to have imagination and create reading material - but there ought to be a point where a person needs to stop and think about the readers - what will they think? How will my writing be viewed? Do I even CARE what they think?
So, if she got the idea for this in church, I don't know - maybe she needs to spend more time there...