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Young Adult Indie
Overall rating 
 
4.5
Writing Style 
 
5.0
Plot/Story 
 
4.0
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N/A
Characters (if applicable) 
 
5.0
Editing/Design Quality 
 
4.0

Blood Oath by Raye Wagner and Kelly St Clare Review

Summary

Verald used to be a beautiful and fertile land. Phaetyn’s kept the land lush and beautiful with their healing magic. The king being a selfish, greedy man killed all the Phaetyn’s and consumed their blood in exchange for immortality. Now with Verald being a desolate kingdom and a vile king as its leader, a rebellion is born. Ryn finds herself right in the middle of the rebellion. She works at The Crane’s Nest for an old family friend and the meeting place of the rebellion. Knowledge of the rebellion causing the king to strike back. Lord Irrik, the king’s drae, captures Ryn and takes her back to the king. Now, Ryn is caught in between of a deadly game and must figure out the rules fast. Her life may not be the only one in danger.



Feedback

Blood Oath was definitely an interesting read. I really enjoyed the story and the development of the characters. Verald is a ruined land due to the actions of the king. Wonderful magic healers, known as Phaetyn’s, were killed to preserve the life of the king and now the land is to rot. The rebellion wants to overthrow the king and hopefully create a land of peace. Verald is overwatched by Lord Irrik, the king’s drae. He is a magical creature that can shift between human and dragon. I love the nightmarish stories that Ryn’s mother tells of the drae to create an image of dred. The world is very well described and so is the history of the land. The cruelty of the king along with the hope and fear of the people.

Ryn finds herself in the middle of the rebellion due to a fateful encounter with Lord Irrick. After witnessing her mother’s murder, Ryn is unable to run away and attacks Irrik. Once she is captured in the castle she is thrown down into the dungeon where she endures weeks of torture. These scenes were particularly hard to get through. The beginning of the torture section of the book were pretty graphic. I really enjoyed that because of the detail. Then the torture scenes continued, and continued. Understanding that these scene make Ryn who she is during the rest of the book, I still found myself waiting for them to end. Her friendship with Ty and Tyr are essential to the story but I feel like this could have been done without the continuous torture. After this portion of the book, I couldn’t put the story down. Once Ryn was out of the dungeon, I needed to know what happened next. The rest of the book was not disappointing and filled with action.

I love Ryn. Her personality is quirky and funny. I found myself smiling during a lot of the scenes in the beginning and the end because of her banter. She loses a bit of her personality during the middle which is understandable due to the torture. Lord Irrik is mysterious and wonderful. His character does make you wonder whose side he’s really on, even though you really want him to be good. The way Irrik shifts, sometimes uncontrollably, was so well executed. There was never any doubt that he was part dragon and that aspect created such a unique part of the story.

This book definitely entertaining. Once I really got into the story it was hard to put down. There were a couple of reasons why I did not rate this book higher. One of the reasons being the torture scenes were too long for me. While very necessary for the story, this could have been decreased with still breaking Ryn personality. Verald layout was a little hard to follow as well. There was a map in the beginning of the book, which I did refer to, but the kingdom was just so small. The size created some confusion when Ryn was traveling.



Final Thoughts

Blood Oath was definitely a unique and interesting read. I really enjoyed the lore of Verald and the Draeconian Realm. Phaetyn and Drae were great elements in creating this story. While the story was unique, my favorite parts of the book were the characters. I loved Ryn since the beginning with her humor and need for adventure. Her remarks kept me smiling even during the dark parts of the book. Lord Irrik was done very well. His shifting from human to dragon was unique and imaginative. Every time he shifted, the image was created by the description read. There are torture scenes in this book that are detailed which I felt like took too much time throughout the story. I would not recommend this book for those who are sensitive to this type of reading. I highly recommend this book for those who enjoy high fantasy stories, magic and dragons! I am looking forward to continuing this story and seeing what happens next.

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